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I asked him how he was

سألته عن حاله

1. I asked him how he was
He said it's unbearable

١. سأَلتُهُ عن حالهِ
فَقالَ لَيسَ يُحتَمَل

2. I asked him about his heart
He said my heart is disturbed

٢. سأَلتهُ عَن قَلبِهِ
فَقالَ قَلبي مُختَبَل

3. I asked him about his passion
He told me it's like a mountain

٣. سأَِلتهُ عن شوقهِ
فَقالَ لي مثل الجبل

4. I asked him about his patience
He said my patience is gone

٤. سأَلتهُ عن صبرهِ
فَقال صبري قد رَحَل

5. I asked him what consoles him
He said don't ask

٥. سأَلتهُ عَمّا يُلا
قيهِ فَقال لا تَسل

6. I asked him about his love
He said it's proverbial

٦. سأَلتهُ عن حبهِ
فَقال مضرَبُ المثل

7. I asked him about his fervor
He said my fervor still remains

٧. سأَلتهُ عَن وَجدِهِ
فَقال وَجدي لم يزل

8. I asked him about himself
He said love has killed him

٨. سأَلتهُ عن نَفسِهِ
قال لها الحبُّ قتل

9. I asked him about his body
He said my body is in pain

٩. سأَلتهُ عن جِسمِهِ
فَقال جسمي في عِلَل

10. I asked him about his illness
He said my illness is love and that's all

١٠. سأَلتهُ عندآئِهِ
فَقال دآئي الحبُّ وال

11. So I asked, is there a cure for him?
He said, who is asking would know

١١. فَقُلتُ هَل لَهُ دواً
فَقال يدري من سأَل

12. I said yes, he asked is there hope?
I said yes

١٢. قُلتُ نعم قالَ وهل
من أَملٍ قُلتُ أَجل

13. He said, it's me. I told him
tomorrow has appointed my fate

١٣. قالَ مني قُلتُ لَهُ
غَداً وَعينَّت الأَجل

14. He said you've prolonged it
I said but what to do?

١٤. فَقال قد اطلتهُ
قُلتُ ولكن ما العمل

15. He said my patience is little
I said and mine is less

١٥. فَقالَ صبري قلَّ قُل
تُ وأنا صبري أَقَل