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Roses are red, violets are blue

لو عاينت عيناك حسن معذبي

1. Roses are red, violets are blue,
Your poem was lovely, though I did not construe.

١. لو عاينت عيناكَ حُسنَ مُعذّبي
ما لُمتني ولكنتَ أولَ من عذر

2. A barrier between us, a gap to transpose,
The nuance and meaning were far beyond prose.

٢. عينُ الرَّشا قدُّ القنا رِدفُ النَّقا
شَعرُ الدُّجى شمسُ الضحى وجهُ القمر