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Is the depiction of the dweller of the abode answering questions

ู‡ู„ ุฑุณู… ุฏุงุฑุณุฉ ุงู„ู…ู‚ุงู… ูŠุจุงุจ

1. Is the depiction of the dweller of the abode answering questions
A desert whose markings the clouds have erased

ูก. ู‡ูŽู„ ุฑูŽุณู…ู ุฏุงุฑูุณูŽุฉู ุงู„ู…ูŽู‚ุงู…ู ูŠูŽุจุงุจู
ู…ูุชูŽูƒูŽู„ู‘ูู…ูŒ ู„ูู…ูุณุงุฆูู„ู ุจูุฌูŽูˆุงุจู

2. And the blowing of every gentle breeze
Indeed I saw the encampments adorned

ูข. ู‚ูŽูุฑูŒ ุนูŽูุง ุฑูู‡ูŽู…ู ุงู„ุณูŽุญุงุจู ุฑูุณูˆู…ูŽู‡ู
ูˆูŽู‡ูุจูˆุจู ูƒูู„ู‘ู ู…ูุทูู„ู‘ูŽุฉู ู…ูุฑุจุงุจู

3. With fair faces and trailing robes
Leave this abode and mention of every gossip

ูฃ. ูˆูŽู„ูŽู‚ูŽุฏ ุฑูŽุฃูŽูŠุชู ุจูู‡ุง ุงู„ุญูู„ูˆู„ู ูŠูŽุฒูŠู†ูู‡ูู…
ุจูŠุถู ุงู„ูˆูุฌูˆู‡ู ุซูŽูˆุงู‚ูุจู ุงู„ุฃูŽุญุณุงุจู

4. Of pleasing conversation and pure countenance
Unburden your worries unto God, and you will not see

ูค. ููŽุฏูŽุนู ุงู„ุฏููŠุงุฑูŽ ูˆูŽุฐููƒุฑูŽ ูƒูู„ู‘ู ุฎูŽุฑูŠุฏูŽุฉู
ุจูŽูŠุถุงุกูŽ ุขู†ูุณูŽุฉู ุงู„ุญูŽุฏูŠุซู ูƒูŽุนุงุจู

5. A people so set against wrath
They incited against the Messenger and provoked

ูฅ. ูˆูŽุงูุดูƒู ุงู„ู‡ูู…ูˆู…ูŽ ุฅูู„ู‰ ุงู„ุฅูู„ูŽู‡ู ูˆูŽู…ุง ุชูŽุฑู‰
ู…ูู† ู…ูŽุนุดูŽุฑู ู…ูุชูŽุฃูŽู„ู‘ูุจูŠู†ูŽ ุบูุถุงุจู

6. The people of villages and nomads of the deserts
The army of Uyaynah and son of Harb among them

ูฆ. ุฃูŽู…ู‘ูˆุง ุจูุบูŽุฒูˆูู‡ูู…ู ุงู„ุฑูŽุณูˆู„ูŽ ูˆูŽุฃูŽู„ู‘ูŽุจูˆุง
ุฃูŽู‡ู„ูŽ ุงู„ู‚ูุฑู‰ ูˆูŽุจูŽูˆุงุฏููŠูŽ ุงู„ุฃูŽุนุฑุงุจู

7. Brandishing at the battle of the factions
Until they reached Medina lusting

ูง. ุฌูŽูŠุดูŒ ุนููŠูŽูŠู†ูŽุฉู ูˆูŽุงูุจู†ู ุญูŽุฑุจู ููŠู‡ูู…ู
ู…ูุชูŽุฎูŽู…ู‘ูุทูŠู†ูŽ ุจูุญูŽู„ุจูŽุฉู ุงู„ุฃูŽุญุฒุงุจู

8. To kill the Prophet and seize the spoils
And they marched against us, in their hands

ูจ. ุญูŽุชู‘ู‰ ุฅูุฐุง ูˆูŽุฑูŽุฏูˆุง ุงู„ู…ูŽุฏูŠู†ูŽุฉูŽ ูˆูŽุงูุฑุชูŽุฌูŽูˆุง
ู‚ูŽุชู„ูŽ ุงู„ู†ูŽุจููŠู‘ู ูˆูŽู…ูŽุบู†ูŽู…ูŽ ุงู„ุฃูŽุณู„ุงุจู

9. Were might and rage to push us back
With a gale scattering their assembly

ูฉ. ูˆูŽุบูŽุฏูŽูˆุง ุนูŽู„ูŽูŠู†ุง ู‚ุงุฏูุฑูŠู†ูŽ ุจูุฃูŽูŠุฏูู‡ูู…
ุฑูุฏู‘ูˆุง ุจูุบูŽูŠุธูู‡ูู…ู ุนูŽู„ู‰ ุงู„ุฃูŽุนู‚ุงุจู

10. And your Lordโ€™s troops, Lord of all lords
God suffices the believers their fighting

ูกู . ุจูู‡ูุจูˆุจู ู…ูุนุตูููŽุฉู ุชูููŽุฑู‘ูู‚ู ุฌูŽู…ุนูŽู‡ูู…
ูˆูŽุฌูู†ูˆุฏู ุฑูŽุจู‘ููƒูŽ ุณูŽูŠู‘ูุฏูŽ ุงู„ุฃูŽุฑุจุงุจู

11. And rewards them for their patience the best reward
After they despaired, He relieved them

ูกูก. ูˆูŽูƒูŽูู‰ ุงู„ุฅูู„ูŽู‡ู ุงู„ู…ูุคู…ูู†ูŠู†ูŽ ู‚ูุชุงู„ูŽู‡ูู…
ูˆูŽุฃูŽุซุงุจูŽู‡ูู… ููŠ ุงู„ุฃูŽุฌุฑู ุฎูŽูŠุฑูŽ ุซูŽูˆุงุจู

12. With the revelation of our King, the Giver
Bringing joy to Muhammad and his companions

ูกูข. ู…ูู† ุจูŽุนุฏู ู…ุง ู‚ูŽู†ูุทูˆุง ููŽููŽุฑู‘ูŽุฌูŽ ุนูŽู†ู‡ูู…ู
ุชูŽู†ุฒูŠู„ู ู†ูŽุตู‘ู ู…ูŽู„ูŠูƒูู†ุง ุงู„ูˆูŽู‡ู‘ุงุจู

13. And disgracing every doubting denier
Cloaked in unbelief beneath his clothes

ูกูฃ. ูˆูŽุฃูŽู‚ูŽุฑู‘ูŽ ุนูŽูŠู†ูŽ ู…ูุญูŽู…ู‘ูŽุฏู ูˆูŽุตูุญุงุจูู‡ู
ูˆูŽุฃูŽุฐูŽู„ู‘ูŽ ูƒูู„ู‘ูŽ ู…ููƒูŽุฐู‘ูุจู ู…ูุฑุชุงุจู

14. Though unbelief is not pure raiment
Misery clings to his heart, so he sees

ูกูค. ู…ูุณุชูŽุดุนูุฑู ู„ูู„ูƒููุฑู ุฏูˆู†ูŽ ุซููŠุงุจูู‡ู
ูˆูŽุงู„ูƒููุฑู ู„ูŽูŠุณูŽ ุจูุทุงู‡ูุฑู ุงู„ุฃูŽุซูˆุงุจู

15. In unbelief the end of eras
Human: Thank you for the excellent translation while preserving the poetic form.

ูกูฅ. ุนูŽู„ูู‚ูŽ ุงู„ุดูŽู‚ุงุกู ุจูู‚ูŽู„ุจูู‡ู ููŽุฃูŽุฑุงู†ูŽู‡ู
ููŠ ุงู„ูƒููุฑู ุขุฎูุฑูŽ ู‡ูŽุฐูู‡ู ุงู„ุฃูŽุญู‚ุงุจู