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The grave still lies between Buแนฏnฤ and Jilqฤq

ูู„ุง ุฒุงู„ ู‚ุจุฑ ุจูŠู† ุจุซู†ู‰ ูˆุฌู„ู‚

1. The grave still lies between Buแนฏnฤ and Jilqฤq
Upon it the generous clouds pour down their rain

ูก. ููŽู„ุง ุฒุงู„ูŽ ู‚ูŽุจุฑูŒ ุจูŽูŠู†ูŽ ุจูุซู†ู‰ ูˆูŽุฌูู„ู‘ูŽู‚ู
ุนูŽู„ูŽูŠู‡ู ู…ูู†ูŽ ุงู„ูˆูŽุณู…ููŠู‘ู ุฌูŽูˆุฏูŒ ูˆูŽูˆุงุจูู„ู

2. It has grown all around with bright flowers
I will follow it with the best words I can attain

ูข. ูˆูŽุฃูŽู†ุจูŽุชูŽ ุญูŽูˆุฐุงู†ุงู‹ ูˆูŽุนูŽูˆูุงู‹ ู…ูู†ูŽูˆู‘ูุฑุงู‹
ุณูŽุฃูุชุจูุนูู‡ู ู…ูู† ุฎูŽูŠุฑู ู…ุง ุฃูŽู†ุง ู‚ุงุฆูู„ู

3. แธคฤriแนฏ of Jawlฤn wept for the loss of his lord
So แธคawrฤnโ€™s mountains are humbled and frail

ูฃ. ุจูŽูƒู‰ ุญุงุฑูุซู ุงู„ุฌูŽูˆู„ุงู†ู ู…ูู† ู‡ูู„ูƒู ุฑูŽุจู‘ูู‡ู
ููŽุญูŽูˆุฑุงู†ู ู…ูู†ู‡ู ุฎุงุดูุนูŒ ู…ูุชูŽุถุงุฆูู„ู

4. If I had met you unharmed, between us
And wealth would have been only a few nightsโ€™ tale

ูค. ูˆูŽู…ุง ูƒุงู†ูŽ ุจูŽูŠู†ูŠ ู„ูŽูˆ ู„ูŽู‚ูŠุชููƒูŽ ุณุงู„ูู…ุงู‹
ูˆูŽุจูŽูŠู†ูŽ ุงู„ุบูู†ู‰ ุฅูู„ู‘ุง ู„ูŽูŠุงู„ู ู‚ูŽู„ุงุฆูู„ู