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I likened them, while the people buzzed with sweat,

ุดุจู‡ุช ูˆุงู„ู‚ูˆู… ุฏูˆูŠู† ุงู„ุนุฑู‚

1. I likened them, while the people buzzed with sweat,
To a fire for Salma, flashing with lightningโ€™s glow.

ูก. ุดูŽุจู‘ูŽู‡ุชู ูˆูŽุงู„ู‚ูŽูˆู…ู ุฏููˆูŽูŠู†ูŽ ุงู„ุนูุฑู‚ู
ู†ุงุฑุงู‹ ู„ูุณูŽู„ู…ู‰ ู„ูŽู…ูŽุนุงู†ูŽ ุงู„ุจูŽุฑู‚ู

2. While above the people, rising camels humped,
When they challenge with a flowing pace,

ูข. ูˆูŽุงู„ู‚ูŽูˆู…ู ููŽูˆู‚ูŽ ูŠูŽุนู…ูŽู„ุงุชู ุดูุฏู‚ู
ุฅูุฐุง ุชูŽุจุงุฑูŽูŠู†ูŽ ุจูุณูŽูŠุฑู ุฏูŽูู‚ู

3. She takes from them the chaff and leaves
A kernel of bounty and freedom.

ูฃ. ุชูŽุฃุฎูุฐู ู…ูู†ู‡ูู†ู‘ูŽ ุงู„ููŽู„ุง ูˆูŽุชูุจู‚ูŠ
ุณูŽุฌููŠู‘ูŽุฉู‹ ู…ูู† ูƒูŽุฑูŽู…ู ูˆูŽุนูุชู‚ู