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My eyes caught a glimpse of him passing by

رآه طرفي على طرف يمر به

1. My eyes caught a glimpse of him passing by
So it unleashed a shower of flowing tears

١. رَآهُ طَرفي عَلى طرفٍ يمرّ بهِ
فَشنَّ غارةَ دمعٍ منهُ مُنسفكِ

2. His virtues have passed in the wake of his glory
The moon passes fleetingly across the celestial sphere

٢. مرّت سَوابقهُ في إثرِ عِثيرهِ
مرّ السحابِ دوينَ البدرِ في الفلكِ

3. Girded with a sword, his gaze not on me
Has not the gaze's sword been enough for me?

٣. مُقلّداً بِحسامٍ غيرِ ناظرهِ
أَما كفاهُ حسامُ الناظرِ الحلكِ

4. Two polished blades, each with a cutting edge
One for another, the other, my heart, for you to ravage

٤. سَيفانِ كلٌّ صقيلٌ حدُّ صارمهِ
هَذا لِغَيري وَذا يا مُهجتي فلكِ