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With a gentle swaying gait so fair

ูˆู…ู‡ูู‡ู ุญุณู† ุงู„ุดู…ุงุฆู„ ุฃู‡ูŠู

1. With a gentle swaying gait so fair
Hearts melt under his charming stare

ูก. ูˆูŽู…ูู‡ูŽูู‡ูŽูู ุญูŽุณูŽู†ู ุงู„ุดูŽู…ุงุฆูู„ ุฃูŽู‡ูŠูŽูู
ุชูุฑุฏู‰ ุงู„ู†ูููˆุณู ุจููุชุฑุชูŽูŠ ุนูŽูŠู†ูŽูŠู‡ู

2. Though he keeps his distance, preferring we part
Iโ€™ve pulled my heart from his handsโ€™ snare

ูข. ู…ุง ุฒุงู„ูŽ ูŠุจุนุฏู†ูŠ ูˆูŽูŠูุคุซุฑ ู‡ูุฌุฑูŽุชูŠ
ููŽุฌูŽุฐุจุชู ู‚ูŽู„ุจูŠ ู…ู† ุฃูŽุณุงุฑ ูŠูŽุฏูŽูŠู‡ู

3. They say, go back to him, but I aptly declared
In verse matching the meter, and to him made clear

ูฃ. ู‚ุงู„ูˆุง ุชูุฑุงุฌูุนูู‡ู ููŽู‚ูู„ุชู ุจุฏูŠู‡ุฉู‹
ู‚ูŽูˆู„ุงู‹ ุฃูู‚ูŠู… ู…ูŽุนูŽ ุงู„ุฑูˆูŠู‘ู ุนูŽู„ูŽูŠู‡ู

4. By God, I'll not go back, even if he
Were the sun, the moon, or Libra so dear

ูค. ูˆูŽุงู„ู„ูŽู‡ู ู„ุง ุฑุงุฌูŽุนุชูู‡ู ูˆูŽู„ูŽูˆ ุงูู†ู‘ูŽู‡ู
ูƒูŽุงู„ุดูŽู…ุณู ุฃูŽูˆ ูƒูŽุงู„ุจูŽุฏุฑู ุฃูŽูˆ ูƒูŽุจูˆูŽูŠู‡ู