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I said, as he passed by walking, while people were either worshippers or lovers:

قد قلت لما مر يخطر ماشيا

1. I said, as he passed by walking, while people were either worshippers or lovers:
"The anemones on his cheek were not enough until he wore a robe of anemones."

١. قَد قُلتُ لَمّا مَرَّ يَخطر ماشِياً
وَالناسُ بَينَ مُعَوِّذٍ أَو عاشِقٍ

٢. لَم يَكفِ ما صَنَعت شَقائِقُ خَدِّهِ
حَتّى تَلَبَّس حلَّةً بِشَقائِقِ