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For Asma a drawing I made today

ู„ุฃุณู…ุงุก ุฑุณู… ุฃุตุจุญ ุงู„ูŠูˆู… ุฏุงุฑุณุง

1. For Asma a drawing I made today
And stood with it till night holding it tight

ูก. ู„ูุฃูŽุณู…ุงุก ุฑูŽุณู…ูŒ ุฃูŽุตุจูŽุญูŽ ุงู„ูŠูŽูˆู…ูŽ ุฏุงุฑูุณุงู‹
ูˆูŽู‚ูŽูุชู ุจูู‡ู ูŠูŽูˆู…ุงู‹ ุฅูู„ู‰ ุงู„ู„ูŽูŠู„ู ุญุงุจูุณุง

2. We came upon a place where naught we see
Save scant remains and faded memories

ูข. ููŽุฌูุฆู†ุง ุจูู‡ูŠุชู ู„ุง ู†ูŽุฑู‰ ุบูŽูŠุฑูŽ ู…ูŽู†ุฒูู„ู
ู‚ูŽู„ูŠู„ู ุจูู‡ู ุงู„ุขุซุงุฑู ุฅูู„ู‘ุง ุงู„ุฑูŽูˆุงู…ูุณุง

3. They circle round each churchโ€™s shaded aisle
My kin forget meโ€”only churches smile

ูฃ. ูŠูŽุฏูˆุฑูˆู†ูŽ ุจูŠ ููŠ ุธูู„ู‘ู ูƒูู„ู‘ู ูƒูŽู†ูŠุณูŽุฉู
ููŽูŠูู†ุณูˆู†ูŽู†ูŠ ู‚ูŽูˆู…ูŠ ูˆูŽุฃูŽู‡ู„ูŠ ุงู„ูƒูŽู†ุงุฆูุณุง