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And when she said to me, when I compared her face

وقائلة لي حين شبهت وجهها

1. And when she said to me, when I compared her face
To the full moon one day, though my path was narrow

١. وَقائِلَةٍ لي حينَ شَبَّهتُ وَجهَها
بِبَدرِ الدُجى يَوماً وَقَد ضاقَ مَنهَجي

2. "You compare me to the full moon, this is a decline
Measured by my worth, though I'm not the first you've wooed

٢. تُشَبِّهي بِالبَدرِ هَذا تَناقُصٌ
بِقَدري وَلَكِن لَستُ أَوَّلَ مَن هُجي

3. Don't you see that the full moon, at its perfection
When the comparison's reached, goes back to a crescent

٣. أَلَمَ تَرَ أَنَّ البَدرَ عِندَ كَمالِهِ
إِذا بَلَغَ التَشبيه عادَ كَدُملُجي

4. So no pride if you've compared my smile to the full moon
And my eyelids to magic, and my hair to the night's darkness

٤. فَلا فَخرَ إِن شَبَّهتَ بِالبَدرِ مَبسَمي
وَبِالسِحرِ أَجفاني وَبِاللَيلِ مَدعَجي