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I was denied guidance for I was foolish,

حرمت الرشاد لأني سفاها

1. I was denied guidance for I was foolish,
I served kings though they were idols,

١. حُرِمْتُ الرّشادَ لأني سَفَاهاً
خَدَمْتُ المُلوك وهُم أعْبُدُ

2. In my greed for them, I was obedient,
Why did I not obey whom I should worship?

٢. وفي رَغَباتي لَهُمْ جِئْتُ إدّاً
فَهَلا رَغِبْتُ لِمَنْ أعْبُدُ