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My ode to you, O life and its years,

قريضك يا حياتي يا سناها

1. My ode to you, O life and its years,
My soul's wish so it would never lose its desire,

١. قَرِيضُكَ يَا حَيَاتِي يَا سَنَاهَا
مُنَى نَفْسِي فَلاَ عَدِمَتْ مُنَاهَا

2. You remained a fortress for it and for Islam,
Giving comfort from the heat of its suffering.

٢. بَقِيتَ لَهَا وَلِلإِسْلاَمِ حِصْناً
تُرِيحُ شَمْسَ سَلْوَتِهَا عَنَاهَا

3. My ode and gentleness to you O brother,
May its pasture never lose you.

٣. قَرِيضُكَ وَاللَّطَافَةِ يَا أَخَاهَا
وَلاَ عَدِمَتْكَ مَرْتَعُهُ حَشَاهَا

4. I ransom you - do you know that my mind
Is captivated by the magic of your poetry since it sensed it?

٤. فَدَيْتُكَ هَلْ عَلِمْتَ بِأَنَّ عَقْلِي
عَقِيرُ عُقَارِ شِعْرِكِ مُذْ حَشَاهَا