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They told her, โ€œDo not marry him, for it is

ูˆู‚ุงู„ูˆุง ู„ู‡ุง ู„ุง ุชู†ูƒุญูŠู‡ ูุฅู†ู‡

1. They told her, โ€œDo not marry him, for it is
The fate of the first spear tips to meet a host.โ€

ูก. ูˆูŽู‚ุงู„ูˆุง ู„ูŽู‡ุง ู„ุง ุชูŽู†ูƒูุญูŠู‡ู ููŽุฅูู†ูŽู‘ู‡ู
ู„ูุฃูŽูˆูŽู‘ู„ู ู†ูŽุตู„ู ุฃูŽู† ูŠูู„ุงู‚ููŠูŽ ู…ูŽุฌู…ูŽุนุง

2. Yet she saw no wisdom in such advice and feared
Remaining unmarried more than the wearer of nightโ€™s cloak.

ูข. ููŽู„ูŽู… ุชูŽุฑูŽ ู…ูู† ุฑูŽุฃูŠู ููŽุชูŠู„ุงู‹ ูˆูŽุญุงุฐูŽุฑูŽุช
ุชูŽุฃูŽูŠูู‘ู…ูŽู‡ุง ู…ูู† ู„ุงุจูุณู ุงู„ู„ูŽูŠู„ู ุฃูŽุฑูˆูŽุนุง

3. Little sleep bothered him more than thoughts
Of vengeanceโ€™s blood or meeting masked warriorsโ€”

ูฃ. ู‚ูŽู„ูŠู„ู ุบูุฑุงุฑู ุงู„ู†ูŽูˆู…ู ุฃูŽูƒุจูŽุฑู ู‡ูŽู…ูู‘ู‡ู
ุฏูŽู…ู ุงู„ุซูŽุฃุฑู ุฃูŽูˆ ูŠูŽู„ู‚ู‰ ูƒูŽู…ููŠู‘ุงู‹ ู…ูู‚ูŽู†ูŽู‘ุนุง

4. Each tribe egging on its own while the enemiesโ€™ blades
Struck not to encourage boasting but to wreak havoc.

ูค. ูŠูู…ุงุตูุนูู‡ู ูƒูู„ูŒู‘ ูŠูุดูŽุฌูู‘ุนู ู‚ูŽูˆู…ูู‡ู
ูˆูŽู…ุง ุถูŽุฑุจูู‡ู ู‡ุงู…ูŽ ุงู„ุนูุฏู‰ ู„ููŠูุดูŽุฌูŽู‘ุนุง

5. With little provision save sickness, his saddle straps
Were cinched tight, and his leather water bag fastened.

ูฅ. ู‚ูŽู„ูŠู„ู ุงูุฏูู‘ุฎุงุฑู ุงู„ุฒุงุฏู ุฅูู„ู‘ุง ุชูŽุนูู„ูŽู‘ุฉู‹
ูˆูŽู‚ูŽุฏ ู†ูŽุดูŽุฒูŽ ุงู„ุดูุฑุณูˆูู ูˆูŽุงูู„ุชูŽุตูŽู‚ูŽ ุงู„ู…ูุนู‰

6. He slept in the wild till it became familiar
And woke with no pasture left to shelter their herd.

ูฆ. ูŠูŽุจูŠุชู ุจูู…ูŽุบู†ู‰ ุงู„ูˆูŽุญุดู ุญูŽุชู‘ู‰ ุฃูŽู„ููู†ูŽู‡ู
ูˆูŽูŠูุตุจูุญู ู„ุง ูŠูŽุญู…ูŠ ู„ูŽู‡ุง ุงู„ุฏูŽู‡ุฑูŽ ู…ูŽุฑุชูŽุนุง

7. An unknowing newcomer he slew, prolonging
The abode of death until the killings spread.

ูง. ุนูŽู„ู‰ ุบูุฑูŽู‘ุฉู ุฃูŽูˆ ุฌูŽู‡ู„ูŽุฉู ู…ูู† ู…ููƒุงู†ูุณู
ุฃูŽุทุงู„ูŽ ู†ูุฒุงู„ูŽ ุงู„ู…ูŽูˆุชู ุญูŽุชู‘ู‰ ุชูŽุณูŽุนุณูŽุนุง

8. She saw a man no game could distract, who,
If he met a human, would face him undaunted.

ูจ. ุฑูŽุฃูŽูŠู†ูŽ ููŽุชู‰ู‹ ู„ุง ุตูŽูŠุฏู ูˆูŽุญุดู ูŠูู‡ูู…ูู‘ู‡ู
ููŽู„ูŽูˆ ุตุงููŽุญูŽุช ุฅูู†ุณุงู‹ ู„ูŽุตุงููŽุญู†ูŽู‡ู ู…ูŽุนุง

9. But raiders scorn being shamed when blamed
By one man marching alone or with an escort.

ูฉ. ูˆูŽู„ูŽูƒูู†ูŽู‘ ุฃูŽุฑุจุงุจูŽ ุงู„ู…ูŽุฎุงุถู ูŠูŽุดูููู‘ู‡ูู…
ุฅูุฐุง ุงูู‚ุชูŽููŽุฑูˆู‡ู ูˆุงุญูุฏุงู‹ ุฃูŽูˆ ู…ูุดูŽูŠูŽู‘ุนุง

10. How can I think of death amidst life or view
Sweetness when ability and cover have abandoned me?

ูกู . ูˆูŽูƒูŽูŠููŽ ุฃูŽุธูู†ูู‘ ุงู„ู…ูŽูˆุชูŽ ููŠ ุงู„ุญูŽูŠูู‘ ุฃูŽูˆ ุฃูŽุฑู‰
ุฃูŽู„ูŽุฐูู‘ ูˆูŽุฃูŽูƒุฑู‰ ุฃูŽูˆ ุฃูŽุจูŠุชู ู…ูู‚ูŽู†ูŽู‘ุนุง

11. I shall not survive long save by raiding a lad
Whose flock I can plunder or whose herd stampedes together.

ูกูก. ูˆูŽู„ูŽุณุชู ุฃูŽุจูŠุชู ุงู„ุฏูŽู‡ุฑูŽ ุฅูู„ู‘ุง ุนูŽู„ู‰ ููŽุชุงู‹
ุฃูุณูŽู„ูู‘ุจูู‡ู ุฃูŽูˆ ุฃูŽุฐุนูŽุฑู ุงู„ุณูุฑุจูŽ ุฃูŽุฌู…ูŽุนุง

12. Yet I know not for certain that I will meet
The grinning teeth of death gleaming hairless.

ูกูข. ูˆูŽุฅูู†ู‘ูŠ ูˆูŽู„ุง ุนูู„ู…ูŒ ู„ูŽุฃูŽุนู„ูŽู…ู ุฃูŽู†ูŽู‘ู†ูŠ
ุณูŽุฃูŽู„ู‚ู‰ ุณูู†ุงู†ูŽ ุงู„ู…ูŽูˆุชู ูŠูŽุจุฑูู‚ู ุฃูŽุตู„ูŽุนุง

13. Who is fooled by heroes must meet with them
At the place of death the same death they were seeking.

ูกูฃ. ูˆูŽู…ูŽู† ูŠูุบุฑูŽ ุจูุงู„ุฃูŽุจุทุงู„ู ู„ุงุจูุฏูŽู‘ ุฃูŽู†ูŽู‘ู‡ู
ุณูŽูŠูŽู„ู‚ู‰ ุจูู‡ูู… ู…ูู† ู…ูŽุตุฑูŽุนู ุงู„ู…ูŽูˆุชู ู…ูŽุตุฑูŽุนุง