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I have become, at the dawn of a long night

ู‚ุฏ ุฃุบุชุฏูŠ ููŠ ุตุจุญ ู„ูŠู„ ูุงุด

1. I have become, at the dawn of a long night,
A flame, a blaze, intense and bright,

ูก. ู‚ูŽุฏ ุฃูŽุบุชูŽุฏูŠ ููŠ ุตูุจุญู ู„ูŽูŠู„ู ูุงุดู
ุจูู†ูŽูŠุฑูŽุฌู ู„ูŽู‡ุจู ู…ูู„ูŽุจู‘ู ู†ุงุดู

2. Decorated, emitting smoke, forceful,
Asking the land about livelihood,

ูข. ู…ูุนูŽู„ู‘ูŽู…ู ู…ูู†ูŽุฎู‘ูุฑู ููŽุดู‘ุงุดู
ูŠูุณุงุฆูู„ู ุงู„ุฃูŽุฑุถูŽ ุนูŽู†ู ุงู„ู…ูŽุนุงุดู

3. Picking up scattered fodder plants,
Like you pick up white hair with tweezers.

ูฃ. ู…ูู„ุชูŽู‚ูุทู ู„ูู„ูƒูŽู„ูŽุฅู ุงู„ู…ูู†ุญุงุดู
ูƒูŽู„ูŽู‚ุทููƒูŽ ุงู„ู…ูŽุดูŠุจูŽ ุจูุงู„ู…ูู†ู‚ุงุดู

4. Leader of every bird and walking beast
Of barking dogs flying like moths

ูค. ุฃูŽู…ูŠุฑู ูƒูู„ู‘ู ุทุงุฆูุฑู ูˆูŽู…ุงุดู
ู…ูู† ุฃูŽูƒู„ูุจู ูŠูŽุทูุฑู†ูŽ ูƒูŽุงู„ููŽุฑุงุดู

5. Yearning for the hunting falconโ€™s signals
Protected from the buzzing insects.

ูฅ. ููŽู‡ู…ู ุฅูู„ู‰ ุฃูŽุดุงุฑูุณู ุนูุทุงุดู
ุชูุตุงู†ู ู„ูู„ุตูŽูŠุฏู ุนูŽู†ู ุงู„ู‡ูุฑุงุดู