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In the turning aside of the wine cup from me, no wine

أفي رد كأس الخمر عني فلا خمرا

1. In the turning aside of the wine cup from me, no wine
Nor sin; its scorpions crawled over me, but no crime.

١. أَفي رَدِّ كَأسِ الخَمرِ عَنّي فَلا خَمرا
عَقارِبُها دَبَّت عَلَيَّ وَلا وِزرا

2. After it I was changed from a maiden flushed and white
To blackness of face like the gloom of night.

٢. وَبُدِّلتُ مِنهَ بَعدَ بَيضاءَ غَضَّةٍ
بِأَسوَدَ لَونٍ كالِحٍ حالِكٍ مُرّا

3. As though the abstainers, when they revolted from drinking it,
Had made war on my cheeks until filled with ink.

٣. كَأَنَّ النَدامى حينَ كَظّوا بِشُربِهِ
مَحارِبُ وَرَّقينَ قَد مُلِأَت حِبرا