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No cheek of youthful green from poetry's freshness,

ู„ุง ูˆุฎุฏ ู…ู† ุฎุถุฑุฉ ุงู„ุดุนุฑ ุฌุฏุจ

1. No cheek of youthful green from poetry's freshness,
No brightness shining like angerโ€™s page,

ูก. ู„ุง ูˆูŽุฎูŽุฏู‘ู ู…ูู† ุฎูุถุฑูŽุฉู ุงู„ุดูŽุนุฑู ุฌูŽุฏุจู
ู„ุงู…ูุนู ู†ูˆุฑูŽู‡ู ูƒูŽุตูŽูุญูŽุฉู ุนูŽุถุจู

2. No smile after frownโ€™s contraction,
No gaze of coquette after reproach.

ูข. ูˆูŽุงูุจุชูุณุงู…ู ู…ูู† ุจูŽุนุฏู ุชูŽู‚ุทูŠุจู ุณูุฎุทู
ูˆูŽุฑูุถุง ู„ูŽุญุธู ู…ูู‚ู„ูŽุฉู ุจูŽุนุฏูŽ ุนูŽุชุจู

3. I have not changed while I lived, nor conversed
With my soul after my love like my love.

ูฃ. ู…ุง ุชูŽุจูŽุฏู‘ูŽู„ุชู ู…ุง ุญูŽูŠููŠุชู ูˆูŽู„ุง ุญูŽุฏู‘ูŽุซ
ุชู ู†ูŽูุณูŠ ู…ูŽู† ุจูŽุนุฏูŽ ุญูุจู‘ูŠ ูƒูŽุญูุจู‘ูŠ