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The dawn was rising midst the gloom when you appeared

أتاني والإصباح ينهض في الدجى

1. The dawn was rising midst the gloom when you appeared
With saffron-tinted wine that cooking never marred;

١. أَتانِيَ وَالإِصباحُ يَنهَضُ في الدُجى
بِصَفراءَ لَم تُفسَد بِطَبخٍ وَإِحراقِ

2. You proffered it as though it were the juice distilled
From narcissi - its limpid brightness stirred the pourer's heart.

٢. فَناوَلَنيها وَالثُرَيّا كَأَنَّها
جِنى نَرجِسٍ حَيّا النَدامى بِها الساقي