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I set out for the hunt at dawn astride a slender steed

ุบุฏูˆุช ู„ู„ุตูŠุฏ ุจุบุถู ูƒุงู„ู‚ุชุฏ

1. I set out for the hunt at dawn astride a slender steed
While night still gently laid its veil upon the land

ูก. ุบูŽุฏูŽูˆุชู ู„ูู„ุตูŽูŠุฏู ุจูุบูุถูู ูƒูŽุงู„ู‚ูŽุชูŽุฏ
ูˆูŽุงู„ู„ูŽูŠู„ู ู‚ูŽุฏ ุฑูŽู‚ู‘ูŽ ุนูŽู„ู‰ ูˆูŽุฌู‡ู ุงู„ุจูŽู„ูŽุฏ

2. The morning breeze blew cool amid the darkness
And dawn kindled softly in the night's black gown

ูข. ูˆูŽุงูุจุชูŽู„ู‘ูŽ ุณูุฑุจุงู„ู ุงู„ู†ูŽุณูŠู…ู ูˆูŽุจูŽุฑูŽุฏ
ูˆูŽุงู„ููŽุฌุฑู ููŠ ู„ูŽูŠู„ู ุงู„ุธูŽู„ุงู…ู ูŠูŽุชู‘ูŽู‚ูุฏ

3. With smooth-gaited fillies, racing oโ€™er the plains
When they bolted, and the horses pursued their course

ูฃ. ุบูŽูˆุงุถููู ู…ูุณูŽู‡ู‘ูู„ุงุชู ู„ูู„ุฃูŽู…ูŽุฏ
ู„ูŽู…ู‘ุง ุนูŽุฏูŽูˆู†ูŽ ูˆูŽุนูŽุฏูŽุช ุฎูŽูŠู„ู ุงู„ุทูŽุฑูŽุฏ

4. Their hooves kicked up dust, their hands prepared
The open plain did thunder with their headlong pace

ูค. ูˆูŽุชูู‚ุชูŽูู‰ ุงู„ุฃูŽุฑุฌูู„ู ูˆูŽุงู„ุฃูŽูŠุฏูŠ ุชูุนูุฏ
ุฃูŽุจุฑูŽู‚ูŽ ุจูุงู„ุฑูŽูƒุถู ุงู„ููŽุถุงุกู ูˆูŽุฑูŽุนูŽุฏ

5. While the devil of the storm arose and took his seat
A gust blew through the sky, and settled calmly

ูฅ. ูˆูŽู‚ุงู…ูŽ ุดูŽูŠุทุงู†ู ุงู„ุบูŽู…ุงู…ู ูˆูŽู‚ูŽุนูŽุฏ
ูˆูŽุทุงุฑูŽ ู†ูŽู‚ุนูŒ ููŠ ุงู„ุณูŽู…ุงุกู ูˆูŽุฑูŽูƒูŽุฏ

6. That which had seemed far to it was now brought near

ูฆ. ู…ูุซู„ูŽ ุงู„ู‚ูŽุฑูŠุจู ุนูู†ุฏูŽู‡ุง ู…ุง ู‚ูŽุฏ ุจูŽุนูุฏ