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With a mustache becoming green through youthfulness

ومستنصر يزهى بخضرة شارب

1. With a mustache becoming green through youthfulness
And languorous eyelids and rose-tinted cheek

١. وَمُستَنصِرٍ يُزهى بِخُضرَةِ شارِبٍ
وَفَترَةِ أَجفانٍ وَخَدٍّ مُوَرَّدِ

2. As if his incisors were upon a moon a wand
a branch sweet smelling soil's wetness

٢. كَأَنَّ عِذارَيهِ عَلى قَمَرٍ عَلى
قَضيبٍ عَلى دَعصٍ رَطيبِ الثَرى نَدي

3. He smiled when I jested with him, as though
he were unveiling a pearl concealed by an emerald's covering

٣. تَبَسَّمَ إِذ مازَحتُهُ فَكَأَنَّهُ
يُكَشِّفُ عَن دُرٍّ حِجابَ زُمُرُّدِ