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I saw the daughter of fate, proud Azah, who became

رأيت ابنة الضمري عزة أصبحت

1. I saw the daughter of fate, proud Azah, who became
Like one gathering wood who finds no wood to gather at night

١. رَأَيتُ اِبنَةَ الضَمريِّ عَزّةَ أَصبَحَت
كَمُحتَطبٍ ما يَلقَ بِالَيلِ يَحطِبِ

2. She used to make us desire her and claim she was
Like the purest pearls arrayed on a high dune

٢. وَكانَت تُمَنّينا وَتزعُمُ أَنّها
كَبَيضِ الأَنوقِ في الصَفا المُتَنَصِّبِ

3. I turned my eyes from her one evening in Barma
To the gloating of enemies, absent and hidden

٣. رَجَعتُ بِها عَني عَشِيّةَ بِرمَةٍ
شَمَاتَةَ أَعداءٍ ضُهُودٍ وَغُيَّب