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I wrote, and if I were able from longing

كتبت ولو أني من الشوق قادر

1. I wrote, and if I were able from longing
I would have hastened in it toward the one I desire

١. كَتَبْتُ وَلَوْ أَنّي مِنَ الشَّوْقِ قَادِرٌ
لَسارَعْتُ فيهِ نَحْوَ مَنْ أَنا رِقُّهُ

2. And if I were to strive toward that sanctuary
By my head I would not give what it deserves

٢. وَلَوْ أَنّني أَسْعَى إلى ذَلِكَ الحِمَى
على الرَّأْسِ ما أَدَّيْتُ ما تَسْتَحِقُّهُ