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I said, as he came rushing towards me,

قلت وقد أقبل يسعى بها

1. I said, as he came rushing towards me,
A tawny gazelle narrating the tale of his eyes,

١. قُلْتُ وَقَدْ أَقْبَلَ يَسْعَى بِهَا
صَفْراءَ تَحْكي فِعْلَ عَيْنَيهْ

2. If I compare his beauty to the sun,
Then the sun is held in the grasp of his hands.

٢. إِنْ قِسْتُهُ بِالشَّمْسِ في حُسْنِهِ
فَالشَّمْسُ في قَبْضَةِ كَفَّيْهْ