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I saw a young man complaining of great pain

رأيت فتى شكا ألما قويا

1. I saw a young man complaining of great pain
In his wrist, leaning on a wise cane

١. رأيت فتى شكا ألماً قوياً
بمعصمه إلى آسٍ رشيدِ

2. I said to him, is it debt or wounds
And what is the cause of this severe distress

٢. فقلت له أداء أم جراح
وما أسباب ذا الكرب الشديدِ

3. He said I met a cordial friend
Who shook my hand like a stubborn giant

٣. فقال لقيت ذا عهد ودوداً
فصافحني كجبار عنيد

4. And squeezed my hand with such force
I thought his fingers were made of iron

٤. وهز يدي شديد الضغط حتى
حسبت بنانه قِطَعَ الحديد

5. A handshake I see as an ill memory
Of meeting him, I won't do it again

٥. مصافحة أراها شر ذكرى
لملقاه ولست بمستعيد

6. He didn't intend to anger me but
He followed the newest custom and trend

٦. ولم يقصد بها غيظي ولكن
جرى فيها على النمط الجديد