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His love enslaves my heavy eyelids

ู‡ูˆุงูƒ ุจูุงุชุฑ ุงู„ุฃุฌูุงู† ุฒู†ู‡

1. His love enslaves my heavy eyelids
And blocks my ears from heeding advice

ูก. ู‡ูŽูˆุงูƒ ุจููุงุชุฑ ุงู„ุฃูŽุฌูุงู† ุฒูู†ู‡ู
ูˆูŽุณูŽู…ุนูƒ ุนูŽู† ุณูŽู…ุงุน ุงู„ุนุฐู„ ุตู†ู‡ู

2. With my own soul have I heard the slanderers accuse him
And bid, โ€œSell your beloved and seek another

ูข. ุจูู†ูŽูุณูŠ ู…ูŽู† ุดูŽูƒุง ุงู„ูˆุงุดูˆู† ู…ูู†ู‡ู
ูˆูŽู‚ุงู„ูˆุง ุจุน ุญูŽุจูŠุจูƒ ูˆุงูุจุบู ุนูŽู†ู‡ู

3. That you may live in blissโ€
To them I made a full confession and said

ูฃ. ุญูŽุจูŠุจุงู‹ ุขุฎุฑุงู‹ ุชูŽุญูŠุง ุณูŽุนูŠุฏุง
ููŽู‚ูู„ุช ู„ูŽู‡ูู… ู…ูŽู‚ุงู„ุฉ ุฐูŠ ุงูุนุชุฑุงู

4. โ€œNay, I have chosen otherwiseโ€
O you who string the pearls of verse

ูค. ูˆูŽู„ูŽูƒู†ู‘ูŠ ุฌูŽู†ุญุช ุฅูู„ู‰ ุงู„ุฎู„ุงูู
ุฃู„ุง ูŠุง ุตุงุฆูุบูŠู† ุญูู„ู‰ ุงู„ู‚ูŽูˆุงููŠ

5. If the old proves true, how can I trust the new?

ูฅ. ุฅูุฐุง ูƒุงู†ูŽ ุงู„ู‚ูŽุฏูŠู… ู‡ููˆูŽ ุงู„ู…ูุตุงููŠ
ูˆูŽุฎุงู†ูŽ ููŽูƒูŽูŠู ุฃูŽุฃุชู…ู† ุงู„ุฌูŽุฏูŠุฏุง