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Why do I see my beloved showing disdain, what is wrong with me?

ما لي أرى فاتني يبدي الجفا ما لي

1. Why do I see my beloved showing disdain, what is wrong with me?
Why can't I endure my beloved's abandonment, what is wrong with me?

١. ما لي أَرى فاتِني يُبدي الجَفا ما لي
ما لي عَلى هَجر مَحبوبي اِصطِبار ما لي

2. I called but found no cup of love to quench my thirst, what is wrong with me?
Oh love, grant me a glance from him and have mercy on this lover in torment.

٢. نادَيت وَالوَجد لي كاس الهيام مالي
يا حُب جد لي بِنَظرَه وَاِرحَم المُغرم

3. And if you wish, take everything I own, my beautiful one.

٣. وَإِن شئت خُذ يا جَميل مِنّي جَميع مالي