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I was asked, "Why did you abandon composing poetry with rhyme

قيل لي لم تركت نظم القوافي

1. I was asked, "Why did you abandon composing poetry with rhyme
When verse is a garden of joy?"

١. قيل لي لِمَ تَرَكت نَظم القَوافي
مَع أنّ القَريض رَوضة أنسِ

2. I said, "I see rhyme does harm
And so I refused to damage my soul."

٢. قُلت إِنّي أَرى القَريض مضرّا
وَلِهَذا أَبيت إِضرار نَفسي

3. They said, "What harm comes to you from it?"
I said, "If you were to ask the shepherd and night watchman,

٣. قيل ماذا الَّذي يضرّك مِنهُ
قُلت لَو تَسألوا يراعي وَطرسي

4. And they came to read it, they would see
In it omens foretelling every ill fate."

٤. فَأَتوا يَقرأونه فَتَراءى
فيهِ عُنوان كُلّ طالع نَحسِ

5. I said, "What did you find?" They answered,
"We found in it the work of a wizard."

٥. قُلت ماذا وَجَدتُمُ فَأَجابوا
قَد وَجَدنا هُناكَ صَنعة هلسِ

6. I said, "Why did you not buy the poem from me?"
They said, "We do not buy it for a cent."

٦. قُلت هَلّا اِشتَرَيتُم الشِعرَ مِنّي
قيل إِنّا لا نَشتَريهِ بِفلسِ