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For you, from my praise, are the flowers of a garden

فدونك من مدحي أزاهر روضة

1. For you, from my praise, are the flowers of a garden
That bloom with ideas like flags.

١. فَدونَكَ مِن مَدحي أَزاهِرَ رَوضَةٍ
تُشَقُّ مِنَ الأَفكارِ عَنها كَمائِمُ

2. I have strung together pearls, though my string is short,
And if I were to string the pearls of your nobility,

٢. نَظَمتُ بِها دُرّاً وَباعي مُقَصِّرٌ
وَلَو أَنَّني فيكَ الدَرارِيَ ناظِمُ

3. I would be the stringer of pearls.
Though the pilgrimage may erase my sins,

٣. لَئِن كانَ فَرضُ الحَجِّ يَمحو مَآثِمي
فَلُقياكَ حَجٌّ وَالخُطوبُ مَآثِمُ

4. To meet you is itself a pilgrimage and an erasing of sins.
Every request is sincere at your generosity

٤. فَكُلُّ اِقتِراحٍ عِندَ جودِكَ صادِقٌ
وَكُلُّ رَجاءٍ يَضمَنُ النُجحَ غارِمُ