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I wrote with it one day in play and rapture

ูƒุชุจุช ุจู‡ุง ููŠ ูŠูˆู… ู„ู‡ูˆ ูˆู‡ุงู…ุชูŠ

1. I wrote with it one day in play and rapture
It practices of its terrors what it practices

ูก. ูƒุชุจุชู ุจู‡ุง ููŠ ูŠูˆู… ู„ู‡ูˆู ูˆู‡ูŽุงู…ุชูŠ
ุชู…ุงุฑุณู ู…ู† ุฃู‡ูˆุงู„ู‡ู ู…ุง ุชูู…ุงุฑุณู

2. And I have men for revelry who have become nimble
Their turbans slipped from their foreheads, and the slippers

ูข. ูˆุนู†ุฏูŠ ุฑุฌุงู„ูŒ ู„ู„ู…ุฌูˆู† ุชุฑุฌู‘ูŽู„ูŽุช
ุนูŽู…ูŽุงุฆูู…ูู‡ูู… ุนู† ู‡ุงู…ูู‡ู… ูˆุงู„ุทู‘ูŽูŠุงู„ุณู

3. So for the wind are those whose pockets it has tossed about
And for the water are those the jars have circled around

ูฃ. ูู„ู„ุฑุงุญ ู…ุง ุฒูุฑู‘ูŽุช ุนู„ูŠู‡ ุฌูŠูˆุจูŽู‡ุง
ูˆู„ู„ู…ุงุก ู…ุง ุฏุงุฑุช ุนู„ูŠู‡ ุงู„ู‚ู„ุงู†ุณู

4. Scrapers along the street corners on their ankles
Withered weeds of Anแนญฤสฟ, soft and dry

ูค. ู…ุณุงุญุจู ู…ู† ุฌุฑู‘ ุงู„ุฒู‚ุงู‚ ุนู„ู‰ ุงู„ู‚ูŽููŽุง
ูˆุงุถุบูŽุงุซู ุฃู†ุทุงุนู ุฌู†ู‘ูู‰ ูˆูŠุงุจุณู