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Do not break my ropes, O camel, for I

ู„ุง ุชุตุฑู…ูŠ ูŠุง ุฌู…ู„ ุญุจู„ูŠ

1. Do not break my ropes, O camel, for I
Am flowers atop the saddlebags, enduring.

ูก. ู„ุง ุชูŽุตุฑูู…ูŠ ูŠุง ุฌูู…ู„ู ุญุจู„ูŠ ูุฅู†ู‘ูŽู†ูŠ
ูˆุฑูˆุฏูŒ ุนู„ูŽู‰ ุณูŽูƒู‘ู ุงู„ุฃูู…ูˆุฑ ุตูŽุฏููˆุฑู

2. Though I stand at the slope of tears you see,
Iโ€™m leather on my loverโ€™s saddle, enduring.

ูข. ูˆูŽุฅูู†ู‘ููŠ ุนู„ูŽู‰ ุณูŽูุญู ุงู„ุฏู…ูˆุนู ุงู„ุชูŠ ุชูุฑู‰
ู„ูŽุฌูŽู„ุฏูŒ ุนูŽู„ู‰ ุจูŽูŠู† ุงู„ุญูŽุจูŠุจู ุตูŽุจูˆุฑู

3. I lit a fire with my tears for he who forsook me,
Keenly aware of the barbs in my eyes.

ูฃ. ูˆูŽุฅูู†ูŠ ุจู†ุงุฑู ุฃูŽูˆู‚ูŽุฏูŽุชู‡ุง ุจูุฐูŠ ุงู„ุบูŽุถุง
ุนูŽู„ู‰ ู…ุง ุจูุนูŽูŠู†ูŠ ู…ูู† ู‚ูŽุฐูŽู‰ู‹ ู„ูŽุจูŽุตููŠุฑู

4. It lit up the desolate wilderness for us
Yet with company it grazes like they grazed, advancing.

ูค. ุฃูŽุถุงุกูŽุช ู„ูŽู†ุง ูˆูŽุญุดูŠุฉ ุบูŠุฑูŽ ุฃู†ู‘ูŽู‡ุง
ู…ูŽุน ุงู„ุฃูู†ุณู ุชุฑุนู‰ ู…ุง ุฑุนูˆุง ูˆุชูŽุณููŠุฑู