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Is manhood like paleness, and youth like redness?

ู‡ู„ ุงู„ุฃุฏู… ูƒุงู„ุขุฑุงู… ูˆุงู„ุฒู‡ุฑ ูƒุงู„ุฏู…ู‰

1. Is manhood like paleness, and youth like redness?
My frequenting of them, those fortunate days,

ูก. ู‡ูŽู„ู ุงู„ุฃูุฏู…ู ูƒูŽุงู„ุขุฑุงู…ู ูˆูŽุงู„ุฒูู‡ุฑู ูƒูŽุงู„ุฏูู…ู‰
ู…ูุนุงูˆูŽุฏูŽุชูŠ ุฃูŽูŠู‘ุงู…ูู‡ูู†ู‘ูŽ ุงู„ุตูŽูˆุงู„ูุญู

2. When my weapon amidst them was my youthfulness,
To it clung a quiver, and lethal spears.

ูข. ุฒูŽู…ุงู†ูŽ ุณูู„ุงุญูŠ ุจูŽูŠู†ูŽู‡ูู†ู‘ูŽ ุดูŽุจูŠุจูŽุชูŠ
ู„ูŽู‡ุง ุดุงุฆูููŒ ููŠ ุณูŽูŠุจูู‡ูู†ู‘ูŽ ูˆูŽุฑุงู…ูุญู

3. Then they swore theyโ€™d never let a drop of rain
Water my grey hairs, even if the clouds poured.

ูฃ. ููŽุฃูŽู‚ุณูŽู…ู†ู‘ูŽ ู„ุง ูŠูŽุณู‚ูŠู†ูŽู†ูŠ ู‚ูŽุทูŽุฑ ู…ูุฒู†ูŽุฉู
ู„ูุดูŽูŠุจูŠ ูˆูŽู„ูŽูˆ ุณุงู„ูŽุช ุจูู‡ูู†ู‘ูŽ ุงู„ุฃูŽุจุงุทูุญู