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My worship of you has long consumed me

أعبد قد طال في ذكراك تفنيدي

1. My worship of you has long consumed me,
And I have nearly failed to keep my vows.

١. أَعَبدَ قَد طالَ في ذِكراكِ تَفنيدي
وَكِدتُ أَقضي وَما تُقضى مَواعيدي

2. If stones could weep with love for you,
Love would have left its mark on the hardest stones.

٢. لَو بِالجَلاميدِ مِن حُبّي لَكُم طَرَفٌ
لَأَثَّرَ الحُبُّ في قاسي الجَلاميدِ

3. If my eyes weep, it is because I am hung,
Like a cluster of grapes with drops for tears.

٣. إِن تَبكِ عَيني فَقَد عُلِّقتُ جارِيَةً
كَأَنَّ ريقَتَها ماءُ العَناقيدِ