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You have prepared reproaches for me with your love,

أعددت لي عتبا بحبكم

1. You have prepared reproaches for me with your love,
O you whose love has prolonged my reproaches!

١. أَعدَدتِ لي عَتباً بِحُبِّكُمُ
يا عَبدَ طالَ بِحُبِّكُم عَتبي

2. Your apparitions have indeed accosted me
In earrings, anklets, and heart.

٢. وَلَقَد تَعَرَّضَ لي خَيالُكُمُ
في القِرطِ وَالخِلخالِ وَالقُلبِ

3. So I have drunk, without directly touching, distress
From a chalice of cool, sweet wine.

٣. فَشَرِبتُ غَيرَ مُباشِرٍ حَرَجا
بِرُضابِ أَشنَبَ بارِدٍ عَذبِ