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You granted him from your toothbrush saliva

وهبت له على المسواك ريقا

1. You granted him from your toothbrush saliva
So it was pleasant for him from your sweet crevice

١. وَهَبتِ لَهُ عَلى المِسواكِ ريقاً
فَطابَ لَهُ بِطيبِ ثَنِيَّتَيكِ

2. I kiss it upon memory as if
I were kissing your mouth and eyelashes in it

٢. أُقَبِّلُهُ عَلى الذِكرى كَأَنّي
أُقَبِّلُ فيهِ فاكِ وَمُقلَتَيكِ