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By his life I betrayed him not, by his life

ูˆุญูŠุงุชู‡ ู„ุง ุฎู†ุชู‡ ูˆุญูŠุงุชู‡

1. By his life I betrayed him not, by his life
And yet into the flames for his pleasure Iโ€™d run

ูก. ูˆูŽุญูŽูŠุงุชูู‡ู ู„ุง ุฎูู†ู’ุชูู‡ู ูˆูŽุญูŽูŠุงุชูู‡ู
ูˆูŽู„ุฃูŽุฏู’ุฎูู„ูŽู†ู‘ูŽ ุงู„ู†ู‘ูŽุงุฑูŽ ููŠ ู…ูŽุฑู’ุถุงุชูู‡ู

2. A moon, when you face him, his brilliance makes
Your own face shine in his radiance, like the sun

ูข. ู‚ูŽู…ูŽุฑูŒ ุฅูุฐุง ุงุณู’ุชูŽู‚ู’ุจูŽู„ู’ุชูŽู‡ู ู„ูุถููŠุงุฆูู‡ู
ุฃูŽุจู’ุตูŽุฑู’ุชูŽ ูˆูŽุฌู‡ูƒูŽ ู…ูู†ู’ู‡ู ููŠ ูˆูŽุฌูŽู†ุงุชูู‡ู

3. The mind is confused by his composition
And speech fails describing his attributesโ€™ traits

ูฃ. ุชูŽุชูŽุญูŽูŠู‘ูŽุฑู ุงู„ุฃูŽูˆู’ู‡ุงู…ู ููŠ ุชูŽุฑู’ูƒูŠุจูู‡ู
ูˆุงู„ูˆูŽุตู’ูู ูŠูŽุนู’ุฌูุฒู ุนู† ุตููุงุชู ุตููุงุชูู‡ู

4. He sways and it seems like a branch of basil
Is shaking with movement in all of his gaits

ูค. ูˆูŽูŠูŽู…ูŠู„ู ู…ูู†ู’ ุญูŽุฑูŽูƒุงุชูู‡ู ููŽูƒุฃู†ู‘ูŽู…ุง
ูŠูŽู‡ู’ุชูŽุฒู‘ู ุบูุตู’ู†ู ุงู„ุจุงู†ู ููŠ ุญูŽุฑูŽูƒุงุชูู‡ู

5. Whenever his glances met someoneโ€™s own staring
That glance sought protection from his lightning gazes

ูฅ. ู…ูŽุง ู„ุงุญูŽุธูŽุชู’ ู„ูŽุญูŽุธุงุชูู‡ู ู„ูŽุญู’ุธูŽ ุงู…ู’ุฑุฆู
ุฅูู„ุง ุงุณู’ุชูŽุนุงุฐูŽ ุงู„ู„ุญู’ุธู ู…ูู†ู’ ู„ูŽุญูŽุธุงุชูู‡ู

6. He brought me to life when we rejoined through his love
And yet killed me with parting before my life's phases

ูฆ. ุฃูŽุญู’ูŠุงู‡ู ู…ูู†ู’ ุจูŽุนู’ุฏู ุงู„ู…ูŽู…ูŽุงุชู ุจููˆูŽุตู’ู„ูู‡ู
ูˆูŽุฃูŽู…ุงุชูŽู‡ู ุจูุงู„ู‡ูŽุฌู’ุฑู ู‚ูŽุจู’ู„ูŽ ู…ูŽู…ุงุชูู‡ู

7. Why not risk all and confess this devotion
When all my thoughts paused before his stepsโ€™ motion

ูง. ู„ูู…ูŽ ู„ุง ุฃูุฎุงุทูุฑู ููŠ ู‡ูŽูˆุงู‡ู ุจูู…ูู‡ู’ุฌูŽุฉู
ูˆูŽู‚ูŽููŽุชู’ ุฎูŽูˆุงุทูุฑูู‡ุง ุนูŽู„ูŽู‰ ุฎูุทููˆุงุชูู‡ู