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My secret from people is an unconcealed secret,

سري عن الناس سر غير مستتر

1. My secret from people is an unconcealed secret,
And the anxiety of my heart is distracted from sight.

١. سِرِّي عن النَّاسِ سِرٌّ غيرُ مُسْتَتِرِ
وَحَتْفُ قَلْبِيَ مَجْلوبٌ عَنِ النَّظَرِ

2. O you whose glance, when it meets mine,
Is more conclusive on my passion than Destiny.

٢. يا منْ إِذا لَحَظَتْني مِنْهُ لَحْظَتُهُ
كَانَتْ عَلى مُهْجَتي أَمْضى مِنَ القَدَرِ

3. I concealed what was in me, so tears made it grow, and how
I took precautions against them, but was not protected from my precautions.

٣. كَتَمْتُ ما بي فَنَمَّتْهُ الدُّموعُ وكمْ
حَذِرْتُ منها وما وُقِّيتُ مِنْ حَذَرِي