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I kept pelting the dog until I made him

ما زلت أرمي الكلب حتى تركته

1. I kept pelting the dog until I made him
Like a broken-winged bird, with no power in its wings.

١. ما زِلتُ أَرمي الكَلبَ حَتّى تَرَكتُهُ
كَسيرَ جَناحٍ ما تَقومُ جَبايِرُه

2. So I crouched over the tails of humiliated kinsfolk
Suffering from my bile, their clans humbled.

٢. فَأَقعى عَلى أَذنابِ أَلأَمِ مَعشَرٍ
عَلى مَضَضٍ مِنّي وَذَلَّت عَشائِرُه

3. War's brother, if it bites him its fang falls out.
He races to the peaks of glory, keeping pace with it.

٣. أَخو الحَربِ إِن عَضَّت بِهِ فَلَّ نابُها
وَسَبّاقُ غاياتٍ وَمَجدٍ يُساوِرُه