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I shook you like the drawing of a glittering sword,

هززتك هزة السيف المحلى

1. I shook you like the drawing of a glittering sword,
Yet when I struck with you, you bent.

١. هَزَزتُكَ هِزَّةَ السَيفِ المُحَلّى
فَلَمّا أَن ضَرَبتُ بِكَ اِنثَنَيتُ

2. I praised you with the praise of a tempting glance,
That you may flow in generosity as I flowed.

٢. مَدَحتُكَ مِدحَةَ الطِرفَ المُجَلّي
لِتَجري في الكِرامِ كَما جَرَيتُ

3. But oh, that praise went astray to no purpose,
I lied about you in it and fabricated.

٣. فَهَبها مِدحَةً ذَهَبَت ضِياعاً
كَذَبتُ عَلَيكَ فيها وَاِفتَرَيتُ

4. For you are not a man who is faithful,
As though when I praised you, I had committed adultery.

٤. فَأَنتَ المَرءُ لَيسَ لَهُ وَفاءٌ
كَأَنّي إِذ مَدَحتُكَ قَد زَنَيتُ