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I walked while night was dark,

سريت والليل داج

1. I walked while night was dark,
Towards the rivers with clamoring frogs.

١. سريت والليل داج
وللسواقي عجاج

2. I headed towards my desire,
As if I were a pilgrim.

٢. أسعى إلى حاجتي
كأنما أنا حاج

3. And my desire was in a fortress,
Protected by high towers.

٣. وحاجتي في حمىً
محصنِ الأبراج

4. It was surrounded
By an iron fence.

٤. عالٍ يحفُّ به
من الحديدِ سياج

5. I complained of its wall—
A lattice of glass.

٥. شكت على سوره
شوائكٌ من زجاج

6. I stood at its gate
Like a beggar in need.

٦. وقفت في بابه
كالسائل المحتاج

7. Looking for her face,
Hoping it would smile.

٧. مستطلعاً وجهها
لعله ذو انبلاج

8. My night passed while I
Met with refusal.

٨. ومر ليلي وبي
وجدٌ شديد اللجاج

9. After being spurned,
I returned in disappointment.

٩. وعدت في خيبتي
من بعد لثمِ الرتاج