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here is my attempt at translating the Arabic poem into English:

أقول والقلب في هم وتعذيب

1. here is my attempt at translating the Arabic poem into English:
I speak, while my heart is in anguish and torment

١. أَقولُ وَالقَلبُ في هَمٍ وَتَعذيبِ
يا كُلَّ يوسُفَ إِرحَم نِصفَ أَيّوبِ