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I swear, O blamer, by the one I've been afflicted with,

أقسمت يا لائمي فيمن بليت به

1. I swear, O blamer, by the one I've been afflicted with,
And who has become unyielding in estranging me,

١. أَقسَمتُ يا لائِمي فيمَن بُليتُ بِهِ
وَقَد تَحَكَّم في هَجري وَإِبعادي

2. If he, whenever I traveled, were to bid me adieu
With a kiss, I'd forever be journeying happily.

٢. لَو أَنَهُ كُلَّما سافَرتُ وَدَّعَني
بِقُبلَةٍ لَم أَزَل في الرائِحِ الغادي