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I thought the morning breeze, when it flowed along the river,

ظننت الصبا لما على النهر قد جرت

1. I thought the morning breeze, when it flowed along the river,
And the reflection of a brilliance flashed for the onlooker,

١. ظَنَنْتُ الصَّبا لَمَّا على النهرِ قد جَرَتْ
وعَكْسُ ذُكاءٍ لاح فيه لِمُرْتَقِبْ

2. Was a net, by which the zephyr turned into a gazelle,
Don't you see it always quivering in it out of anxiety?

٢. شِباكاً بها صار النَّسيم غَزالةً
ألَسْتَ تَراها دائماً فيه تضْطَرِبْ