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My heart, accustomed to stillness.. bids it farewell

ู‚ู„ุจูŠ ุงู„ุฐูŠ ุงุนุชุงุฏ ุงู„ุฑูƒูˆุฏ .. ูŠูˆุฏุนู‡

1. My heart, accustomed to stillness.. bids it farewell
Alive tomorrow.. after youth.. its patches

ูก. ู‚ู„ุจูŠ ุงู„ู‘ุฐูŠ ุงุนุชูŽุงุฏ ุงู„ุฑูƒูˆุฏูŽ .. ูŠูˆุฏู‘ุนูู‡
ุญูŠู‘ุงู‹ ุบุฏุงย  .. ุฅุซู’ุฑ ุงู„ุตุจุงุจุฉู .. ุจู„ู‚ุนูู‡

2. Resembling the lute.. its moaning became
A rhythm of longing, while the ribs provoke it

ูข. ู…ุชุดุงุจู‡ูŒ ูˆุงู„ุนูˆุฏ .. ุตุงุฑย  ุฃู†ูŠู†ูู‡
ุฅูŠู‚ุงุน ุดูˆู‚ู ูˆุงู„ุถู„ูˆุน ุชุฑุฌู‘ุนูู‡

3. The wailing of the melodies that my poetry's Ziryab
Sang with.. its tears and torment

ูฃ. ุดุฌูˆู ุงู„ุชู‚ุงุณูŠู…ู ุงู„ุชูŠ ุบู†ู‘ู‰ ุจู‡ุง
ุฒุฑูŠุงุจู ุดุนุฑูŠ .. ุฏูŽู…ุนูู‡ ูˆุชูˆุฌู‘ุนูู‡

4. And the dancing maidens of meanings.. its pulse
And the dreaming of melodies.. its twisting

ูค. ูˆุงู„ุฑู‘ุงู‚ุตุงุชู ู…ู† ุงู„ู…ุนุงู†ูŠ .. ู†ุจุถูู‡
ูˆุงู„ุญุงู„ูู…ุงุชู ู…ู† ุงู„ู„ู‘ุญูˆู†ูย  .. ุชูˆู„ู‘ูุนู‡

5. Bestow upon the one who sang and brought comfort.. granting
A kingdom.. enjoying all pleasures.. I bring together

ูฅ. ย ุฃู†ุนูู…ู’ ุจู…ู† ุฃุบู†ูŽู‰ ูˆุฃู‚ู†ู‰ .. ูˆุงู‡ุจุงู‹
ู…ูู„ูƒุงู‹ย  .. ุชู†ุนู‘ู…ูŽ ุจุงู„ู…ุจุงู‡ุฌู ุฃุฌู…ุนูู‡

6. My heart that loves you I honor with love
But if it accepts disgrace.. I will cast it off

ูฆ. ู‚ู„ุจูŠ ุงู„ุฐูŠ ูŠู‡ูˆุงูƒูŽ ุฃููƒุฑู… ุจุงู„ู‡ูˆู‰
ู„ูƒู† ุฅุฐุง ุฑุถููŠูŽ ุงู„ู…ุฐู„ู‘ุฉ .. ุฃุฎู„ุนูู‡