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I offered him my affection when he was small, and my support,

مهدت له ودي صغيرا ونصرتي

1. I offered him my affection when he was small, and my support,
And shared with him my money, and housed him in my home.

١. مَهَدتُ لَهُ وُدّي صَغيراً وَنُصرَتي
وَقاسَمتُهُ مالي وَبَوَّأتُهُ حِجري

2. And it would have sufficed him, from all of life,
That hope and despair return to poverty.

٢. وَقَد كانَ يَكفيهِ مِنَ العَيشِ كُلِّهِ
رَجاءٌ وَيَأسٌ يَرجِعانِ إِلى فَقرِ

3. And he has faults beyond counting,
The least of them more shameful than blasphemy.

٣. وَفيهِ عُيوبٌ لَيسَ يُحصى عِدادُها
فَأَصغَرُها عَيباً يَجِلُّ عَنِ الكُفرِ

4. And if I revealed to people some of them,
He would become like spit of loved ones in the sea.

٤. وَلَو أَنَّني أَبدَيتُ لِلناسِ بَعضَها
لَأَصبَحَ مِن بَصقِ الأَحِبَّةِ في بَحرِ

5. So I veil your shame while I live, and if I die,
I swear, none shall disturb your grave but me.

٥. فَدونَكَ عِرضي فَاِهجُ حَيّاً وَإِن أَمُت
فَأُقسِمُ إِلّا ما خَريتَ عَلى قَبري