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I asked the lovers who endured

ุณุฃู„ุช ุงู„ู…ุญุจูŠู† ุงู„ุฐูŠ ุชุญู…ู„ูˆุง

1. I asked the lovers who endured
The torments of this love in days gone by,

ูก. ุณูŽุฃู„ุชู ุงู„ู…ุญุจู‘ูŠู† ุงู„ู‘ุฐูŠ ุชุญู…ู‘ู„ูˆุง
ุชูŽุจุงุฑูŠุญูŽ ู‡ูŽุฐุง ุงู„ุญุจู‘ ููŠ ุณุงู„ู ุงู„ุฏู‡ุฑู

2. And said, โ€œWhat makes love fade after
It has settled between heart and breast?โ€

ูข. ููŽู‚ูู„ุชู ู„ูŽู‡ู… ู…ุง ูŠูุฐู‡ุจ ุงู„ุญุจู‘ ุจุนุฏู…ุง
ุชูŽุจูˆู‘ุฃ ู…ุง ุจูŠู†ูŽ ุงู„ุฌูŽูˆุงู†ุญู ูˆุงู„ุตุฏุฑู

3. They said, โ€œLoveโ€™s cure is a love that removes it
Through eventual estrangement or long separation.

ูฃ. ููŽู‚ุงู„ูˆุง ุดูุงุก ุงู„ุญุจู‘ ุญุจูŒู‘ ูŠูุฒูŠู„ู‡ู
ู…ูู† ุขุฎุฑ ุฃูˆ ู†ุฃูŠูŒ ุทูˆูŠู„ูŒ ุนู„ู‰ ู‡ุฌุฑู

4. Or despair, until the soul despairs after
Hopingโ€”and despair aids in patience.โ€

ูค. ุฃูŽูˆ ุงู„ูŠุฃุณ ุญุชู‘ู‰ ุชุฐู‡ู„ ุงู„ู†ูุณู ุจูŽุนุฏู…ุง
ุฑูŽุฌุช ุทูŽู…ุนุงู‹ ูˆุงู„ูŠุฃุณ ุนูˆู†ูŒ ุนู„ู‰ ุงู„ุตุจุฑู