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Had there been no watcher when they packed to depart at dawn

لولا الرقيب غداة زموا الأينقا

1. Had there been no watcher when they packed to depart at dawn
I would have bidden farewell to a burning heart

١. لَولا الرَقيب غَداةَ زَمّوا الأَينَقا
لَسَقَيتُ بالتَوديعِ قَلباً مُحرَقا

2. I held back my tears but my eyes betrayed
My sorrow

٢. صُنتُ الدُموعَ فأَظهَرَتِ النَوى
مِنّـــــــــــي

3. And I watched from between their mounts
Keeping wary of the watcher, apprehensive,

٣. وَجَعَلتُ أَنظُر في خِلالِ مَطيّهم
مُتَلَفِّقاً حَذَرَ المُراقِبِ مُشفِقا

4. If the turns of fate were common knowledge
Parting would have become easy

٤. لَو كانَ صَرفُ الدَهر أَصبَحَ ذائِعاً
لِلبُعدِ أَصبَحَ جا