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A brother who was my ally and helper

أخ كان لي وهو الحليف المساعد

1. A brother who was my ally and helper
Has changed, so today he is opposed and distant

١. أخٌ كانَ لي وهو الحليفُ المساعدُ
تنكّرَ فهو اليومَ ضدٌّ مُباعِدُ

2. He saw his grandfather at the peak of glory ascending
So he was blinded by a grandfather above my ascending grandfather

٢. رأى جده في ذروةِ المجدِ صاعداً
فأطغاهُ جَدٌّ فوقَ جَدي صاعِدُ

3. And he used to see me sitting while he was standing
So he has become seeing me standing while he is sitting

٣. وكان يراني قاعِداً وهو قائمٌ
فصار يراني قائماً وهو قاعِدُ

4. So he has developed an arrogance where he doesn't call his newborn
And those promises of his have become threats

٤. فأحدثَ زهواً لا يُنادي وليدُهُ
وأضحى وعيداً منه تلك المواعِدُ