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I say to him whose temple grey hairs streak:

أقول لمن لاح المشيب بفوده

1. I say to him whose temple grey hairs streak:
"I found him erring from the right though weak."

١. أقولُ لِمنْ لاحِ المَشِيبُ بفَوْدِهِ
وألفَيْتُهُ من غَيِّهِ ليسَ يُقصِرُ

2. "Thy pardon grant if youth's wild night misled,
For thick the shades that o'er its path were spread."

٢. عذرْتُكَ إنْ أضلَلْتَ رُشدَكَ خاطئاً
ولَيلُ الشَّبابِ الوَحْفِ داجٍ فَمُعذِرُ

3. "Hast thou, when years have crowned thy head with age,
For error meet excuse?"—My lips I close:

٣. فهلْ لكَ في سِنَّ الكُهولَةِ عاذِرٌ
إذا زغْتَ عن قَصْدٍ ولَيلُكَ مُقمِرُ