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The blushing of his cheeks for a glance makes swords ring when armies clash.

ูˆุฃู‡ูŠู ู…ุดุฑูˆุท ุงู„ุฎุฏูˆุฏ ู„ุทุฑูู‡

1. The blushing of his cheeks for a glance makes swords ring when armies clash.
He has charm, enchanting as the crescent moon, his glances like a warriorโ€™s blade.

ูก. ูˆุฃู‡ูŠู ู…ุดุฑูˆุท ุงู„ุฎุฏูˆุฏู ู„ูุทูŽุฑูู‡
ุฅุฐุง ู…ุง ุฑูŽู†ูŽุง ูุนู„ ุงู„ุณู‘ูŠูˆูู ุงู„ู‚ูŽูˆุงุถุจู

2. They ignorantly blame his cheeksโ€™ complexion though by God no flaw exists.
Rather his glances are swords that make remnants of armies take to their heels.

ูข. ู„ูŽู‡ ุบูุฑู‘ุฉูŒ ูุชู‘ุงู†ุฉูŒ ุชูŽู†ู’ุชู…ูŠ ุฅู„ู‰
ู‡ู„ุงู„ู ูˆุทุฑููŒ ูŠู†ุชู…ูŠ ู„ูู…ูุญูŽุงุฑูุจ

ูฃ. ูŠุนูŠุจูˆู†ูŽู‡ ุฌู‡ู„ุงู‹ ุจุดูŽุฑุทู ุฎุฏูˆุฏูู‡
ูˆู…ุง ููŠู‡ ู„ุง ูˆุงู„ู„ู‡ู ุนูŠุจูŒ ู„ูุนุงูŠุจู

ูค. ูˆู„ูƒู†ู‘ู…ุง ู‡ุงุชูŠูƒูŽ ุฃุณูŠู’ุงู ู„ูŽุญู’ุธูู‡ู
ุจู‡ู†ู‘ ูู„ููˆู„ูŒ ู…ูู† ู‚ุฑุงุน ุงู„ูƒูŽุชุงุฆุจู