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First it appears like a creation of pure

فأول ما يبدو فخلق سبيكة

1. First it appears like a creation of pure
White silver, perfectly crafted by the maker

١. فأوّلُ ما يبدو فَخلقُ سبيكةٍ
مُخلصةٍ بيضاء أتقنها السَّبكُ

2. It built itself above the bracelet standing
Shining like a pearl embraced by a wire

٢. بَنَت نَفسَها فوقَ الزُّمرّذِ واقفاً
فلاحت كمثلِ الدِّر ضمنهُ السِّلكُ

3. It plucked a lily, if it weren't for the brightness of its complexion
It wouldn't have adorned smiling mouths or laughter

٣. جنى سُوسَن لولا سنا بشراتهِ
لما زيّنَ الأفواهَ تغرّ ولا ضحكُ