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I brandished you like a gilded sword,

هززتك هزة السيف المحلى

1. I brandished you like a gilded sword,
but when I struck with you, you bent.

١. هَزَزتُكَ هِزَّةَ السَيفِ المُحَلّى
فَلَمّا أَن ضَرَبتُ بِكَ اِنثَنَيتُ

2. I praised you with the praise of a coy glance,
so you would flow in honor as I did.

٢. مَدَحتُكَ مِدحَةَ الطَرفِ المُجَلّي
لِتَجرِيَ في الكَرامِ كَما جَرَيتُ

3. But that praise went to waste,
for I lied about you and fabricated.

٣. فَهَبها مِدحَةً ذَهَبَت ضَياعاً
كَذِبتُ عَلَيكَ فيها وَاِفتَرَيتُ

4. You are not a man of loyalty.
It was as if, when I praised you, I had sinned.

٤. فَأَنتَ المَرءُ لَيسَ لَهُ وَفاءٌ
كَأَنّي إِذ مَدَحتُكَ قَد زَنَيتُ